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My new foal sitter.pg1. by lilmandarin My new foal sitter.pg1. by lilmandarin
Ome more love story) I sooo like "Mi Amore Cadenza" and Shining Armour!^^
Кэйденс: Сиделка? Звучит неплохо...
К: Спарклы, где же вы?
К: Нашла!
*странный звук звонка*
К:Большой дом для семьи обычных единорогов
СуперБрони: Когда я в кого нибудь влюблюсь, ты узнаешь об этом первая, Твайлайт!
Смущенная поняша, восседающая на белом коне: Я ведь его не убила?!
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:iconyue-luv-art:
yue-luv-art Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
lol!!
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:iconnastia1luna:
Nastia1luna Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013
Неп
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:iconprototype223:
PROTOTYPE223 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013
Keydens: Nurse? Sounds good ...
By: Sparkle, where are you?
By: Found!
* strange sound of the bell *
By: Great house for a family usual unicorns
SuperBroni: When I fall in love somebody, you'll know about it first, Twilight!
Confused ponyasha, seated on a white horse: I did not kill him?


this is the description in English
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:iconraging-ball-of-fury:
Raging-Ball-Of-Fury Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm a little confused, what happened? Did they just bump into each other?
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:iconwarriorcats098:
WarriorCats098 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Professional Photographer
Смешные я смеялся трудно! :rofl:
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:iconwarriorcats098:
WarriorCats098 Featured By Owner May 8, 2013  Professional Photographer
Well I do not really but I can not from Russian, however. xD
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:icontatsurou-san:
Tatsurou-san Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013
Minor typo.
Shining Armor's line should read "When I FALL in love..."
Cute comic.
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:iconmasterghostunlimited:
MasterghostUnlimited Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
very cute and love hurts when he at lease expected lol
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:iconyarrix:
Yarrix Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
More...More...MORE!!!
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:iconsnowflake-storm:
SnowFlake-Storm Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012
It's hilarious! <3 ♥ Are you going to continue?
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:iconalchemievil:
AlchemiEvil Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012
Крута. :о
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:icondeermoon:
DeerMoon Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2012
Хах, классно =3
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:iconlilmandarin:
lilmandarin Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Спасибо^^
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:iconturtleboy1:
TurtleBoy1 Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012
And that's how Equestria was made
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:iconfanfiction-princess:
Fanfiction-Princess Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2012  Student Writer
So cute! I can't wait to see the next! :D
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:iconpinka13:
Pinka13 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2012
wheres the the next page?
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:iconfoxesdemonica:
foxesdemonica Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Gotta love these two.

Even if the grammar sort of bugs me. Would you like help?
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:iconlilmandarin:
lilmandarin Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If you want to help, I will not refuse))
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:iconfoxesdemonica:
foxesdemonica Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ok cool. Lets see...

1st panel: It looks like "foal siller", shuld be "foal sitter"

4th panel: "Big house to family of regular unicorns" would probably be better as something like "Pretty big house for a family of regular unicorns"

5th panel: "When I fell in love, you know it first, Twilight" should be "When I fall in love, you'll know it first, Twilight"

6th panel: "Oh my gosh... I kill him" should be "Oh my gosh... did I kill him"
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:iconlilmandarin:
lilmandarin Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Look at this now ^^ And thank you very much))
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:iconfoxesdemonica:
foxesdemonica Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Much better, although it still says "when I fell in love" where it should say "when I fall in love". But still, overall it's greatly improved.

Glad I could help :) If you ever need help editing anything else, let me know.
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:iconlilmandarin:
lilmandarin Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Good)) Thank you, again))
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:iconfoxesdemonica:
foxesdemonica Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Any time :)
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grifnoff Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
lol now i know how they met the first time ^^
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Anubislaughed Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
The best relationships usually start in unusual ways.
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Darthsylar12 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hopefully remembered to bring a shovel...LOL great beginning
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BunnyHareRabbit Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
great work
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:iconcrazydiary86:
crazydiary86 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
Ops. Bad begin :giggle:
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:iconnavy-x:
Navy-x Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
are there going to be more
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:iconlilmandarin:
lilmandarin Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
course
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:iconnavy-x:
Navy-x Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012
sweet thank you
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:icongashock:
Gashock Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
The grammar could use some work, but I'm still lovin' it.
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:icontemplar127:
templar127 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012
He didn't see that one coming!
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:iconkasil10:
Kasil10 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
why the hell is your avatar beating a stone?
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:icontemplar127:
templar127 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012
Because he CAN! XD
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:iconanhero23:
anhero23 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Do you need a translator?
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Crimson-Breloom Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Either that or "knew" because the tenses are wrong depending on which one you wanna say.

"When I fall in love, you'll know it first, Twilight."

Or

"When I fell in love, you knew it first, Twilight."
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:iconlilmandarin:
lilmandarin Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I will correct)
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:iconcrimson-breloom:
Crimson-Breloom Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Shouldn't it be "you'll" know first?
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:iconcjfinnegan:
CJFinnegan Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Naaaaaah, just knocked him unconscious.
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:iconrev6pilot:
REV6Pilot Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Did she trip him?
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:iconhitswinton:
Hitswinton Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
oops XD
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KeinZantezuken Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Тебе бы надо скооперироваться с кем-то, кто знает английский более-менее. Ибо, сказать по правде, выглядит немного глупо на сломанном игнлише >_>
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Brainstormer623 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It's, "Love at First Sight" not, "Love at First Hit"! XD!

Wait, that was a lame pun. Sorry. ^^;
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ScarletPearlPrincess Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
OHMYCELESTIAIKILLEDHIM *runs away as fast as she can*
ULL NEVER TAKE ME ALIVE COPPERS AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Anorelle Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
LOL!
"Oh my gosh..

Did I kill him?"
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:iconlilmandarin:
lilmandarin Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
^^
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